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Post by jo on Mar 1, 2006 8:19:19 GMT -5
i'm not as good with the witty chatter as GG; so i'm not even gonna try. it's too early and i haven't had any coffee yet.
just to refresh your memories, these are the march challenge lines:
Opening Line
He cautiously leaned his head around the doorframe.
Closing Line
Abby was dressed all in green.
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Post by shanna on Mar 14, 2006 13:33:52 GMT -5
A/N: I thought i'd give it a shot. It's short but then again my imagination ran out.
He cautiously leaned his head around the doorframe. He quickly snatched it back so she wouldn’t see him.
Inside the lab Abby was trying to work, she’d caught the reflection in the monitor a good half hour before and wasn’t sure why he hadn’t come in.
Upstairs in the bullpen Tony was working at his computer when an instant message popped up.
A.Scuito: Are you missing something?
T.DiNozzio: I don’t think so Abs.
A.Scuito: Are you certain?
T.DiNozzio: What you think I’m missing?
A.Scuito: Is there a desk empty?
T.DiNozzio: Probie. What’s he doing now?”
A.Scuito: Lurking.
T.DiNozzio: Want me to get rid of him?
A.Scuito: Do something with him.
T.DiNozzio: I’ll be right there.
Tony closed the screen and got up from his desk.
“Where do you think you’re going DiNozzio?” Gibbs asked.
“Abby has pest problem she wants me to take care of.”
“What kind of pest problem?” Gibbs asked.
“The human kind. I’ll be right back.”
When Tony arrived outside Abby’s lab, McGee was still peaking around the corner.
“McGee.” Tony whispered in his ear causing him to jump. “What do you think you’re doing?”
“There’s something wrong with Abby.”
“I was just talking to her she’s fine.”
“She’s dressed like an alien.”
“I know Abby has an interesting style but I think you’ve been watching a little too much of the Twilight Zone.” Tony patted him on the back.
“If you don’t believe me looked for yourself.” McGee suggested.
Tony peered around the doorframe and Abby was dressed all in green.
THE END
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Jenny
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Post by Jenny on Mar 14, 2006 13:41:16 GMT -5
Cute story, shanna!  I love it! I couldn't even come up with something for this month's challenge!  |
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Post by jo on Mar 16, 2006 9:19:52 GMT -5
shanna, great story! i can actually see this happening.
all you guys have the personas of these characters down pat. it's so amazing to read your stories.
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I love it! I couldn't even come up with something for this month's challenge! 