Fan Fiction by 19jim47

[19jim47]

On the morning of tuesday 20th at 07:00 hours agent gibbs awoke from a bad dream. Even though gibbs couldnt understand why he had dream't such a thing. He dream't he was in the office with the gang investergating a death of a navy officer with whom buzzled Tony as him and ziva just got back from a very bad drive back from seeing the director. So gibbs grabed what he could from his top draw and told tony and mcgee to acopany him to a grave site.

The grave site,
It was a merkey night after the rain went due north. And went to the localcation were the navy offcer was found. It was quiet night you could here a pin drop. Untill (ring ring) it was Abbey from the lab wanting to talk to gibbs about what she and ducky found. He hangs up and tony looks up and says" whats up boss" he repleys this has to be a joke. What must be a joke gibbs tony said vamperic my but. What mcgee and tony said together. Then he woke up sweatie from his wierd dream.

more coming soon. I hope you like it i was on the train and i strated writing it down.

[19jim47]

I take it you guys hated it. I did have some more storeys to tell.

[Loko]

Aww, I didn't hate it. The plot had potential, but it's differcult to enjoy reading it when the spelling and grammar is off. You shoud try getting a Beta-reader to correct the mistake and give you some feedback before you post it. If you don't check the spelling, or put capital letters in the names, the reader will get the feeling you haven't put much effort in writing it. Most people don't bother reading fanfics if there's too many errors, even though the story itself is good. I'd offer to beta-read, but English is my 2:nd language so I'm afraid I wouldn't be the best person for the job.