Post by Ines on Jul 4, 2005 16:38:51 GMT -5
Hi ya!
Since I´ve seen the end of "Twilight" I think about writing some kind of series of fanfictions (recognized that I have too many ideas to put it into one fic...) about what could happen if Kate survived... However, I just wanted to post the first few lines and ask you to comment... I need to know if there´s any hope someone´s gonna read it ;D...
So here we go... the first lines of the first part...
Day and Night – Part 1
Not Waking Up ( Get some hankies guys! This is NOT going to be one of the nice parts!)
„Tony… Come on now, get back to work. “Gibbs carefully placed his hand on Tony’s shoulder. Since Kate had been shot and was in a coma, he wasn’t the same immature guy he had been before. He was almost quiet – Of course, there were those moments when the whole team was just playing jokes on each other, but it wasn’t comparable to what it had once been.
“She isn’t getting any better, Gibbs. It’s almost been a year but she isn’t getting ANY better.” he said, not looking at him.
Gibbs sighed “No, she isn’t.” He hated to see Tony like this. In the beginning, everybody had hoped that Kate would wake up soon and that everything was going to be fine – but time went on and absolutely nothing happened. Some had already given up hope and even Gibbs, Abby and Ducky were beginning to doubt that she would ever wake up. The only one who still fought against what the doctors said was Tony. Nobody visited her as often as Tony did. He just sat there, holding her hand, thinking about all the things he never dared to tell her, watching her. She looked as if she was just sleeping. So peaceful, except for the scar on her forehead where the bullet had hit her...
...?! TBC...?!
Since I´ve seen the end of "Twilight" I think about writing some kind of series of fanfictions (recognized that I have too many ideas to put it into one fic...) about what could happen if Kate survived... However, I just wanted to post the first few lines and ask you to comment... I need to know if there´s any hope someone´s gonna read it ;D...
So here we go... the first lines of the first part...
Day and Night – Part 1
Not Waking Up ( Get some hankies guys! This is NOT going to be one of the nice parts!)
„Tony… Come on now, get back to work. “Gibbs carefully placed his hand on Tony’s shoulder. Since Kate had been shot and was in a coma, he wasn’t the same immature guy he had been before. He was almost quiet – Of course, there were those moments when the whole team was just playing jokes on each other, but it wasn’t comparable to what it had once been.
“She isn’t getting any better, Gibbs. It’s almost been a year but she isn’t getting ANY better.” he said, not looking at him.
Gibbs sighed “No, she isn’t.” He hated to see Tony like this. In the beginning, everybody had hoped that Kate would wake up soon and that everything was going to be fine – but time went on and absolutely nothing happened. Some had already given up hope and even Gibbs, Abby and Ducky were beginning to doubt that she would ever wake up. The only one who still fought against what the doctors said was Tony. Nobody visited her as often as Tony did. He just sat there, holding her hand, thinking about all the things he never dared to tell her, watching her. She looked as if she was just sleeping. So peaceful, except for the scar on her forehead where the bullet had hit her...
...?! TBC...?!
Forget everything that I previously posted and go back to the OLD rules ie Shippy Fics must be posted in the Shipper Zone - and absolutely no where else!
