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Post by k8tyds on Dec 25, 2005 4:39:25 GMT -5
If you guys think there should be Kibbs or no Kibbs, I'd love some input. Hope you like it! yes, please.... ;D pretty please?  ? ;D is that really such a bad thing??? i dont really like fornell....  |
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Post by stingrayfan on Dec 25, 2005 15:35:42 GMT -5
Aww I likw Fornell, but he doesn't like Kate.
Kibbs definetly!!! I love them, my favorite ship couple!!! Please please Kibbs. Kate could help Gibbs through him dealing with Fornell, you can even kill fornell and have Kate comfort him!!
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Post by LJG_NCIS on Dec 30, 2005 12:03:57 GMT -5
Thanks for the input guys, it's greatly appreciated. Just got back from a trip so I'm a little worn out but I'll try to work work work away on both fics.  |
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Post by LJG_NCIS on Jan 7, 2006 15:32:04 GMT -5
Okay, here's the next chapter of The Big Bomb.
Disclaimer: You guys all know it by now.
Chapter 7- It Must Be A Sign Of The Apocalypse
Soon Ducky and Jimmy reached the bullpen. It was not a pretty sight. It seemed that McGee, Tony, Gibbs, and Kate were all having a shouting contest, and their voices combined might be loud enough to cause an avalanche in the Alps.
“What the hell were you doing with Kate in the elevator?!” Tony screamed at Gibbs.
“Mind your own damn business Agent DiNozzo, or I’ll kick you out on your ass and you’ll need to find a new job!” Gibbs screamed just as loudly.
Meanwhile, Kate sank down to her knees and broke down and cried, which is not very Kate-like, and McGee just stood there in the midst of all the chaos looking very confused, which, at times, is very McGee-like.
Palmer and Ducky just stood next to each other on the bottom stair, mouths hanging slightly agape. Suddenly, Jimmy shouted, “EVERYONE JUST SHUT UP!”
This exclamation had the same effect as Abby’s confession had. Everything screeched to a hlat once again. The tense silence was soon broken by Kate, who let out a shaky sob.
Gibbs immediately rushed over to her, taking her in his arms, gently rocking back and forth.
“It’s gonna be okay Katie. Hushhhhh.”
With Gibbs comforting voice whispering in her ear, Kate’s sobs sson stopped, except for the occasional sniffle.
“Good Lord Jethro, what happened?” Ducky finally ventured to ask.
“I’ll tell you what’s happened. They were stuck together in an elevator for nearly two hours, doing God knows what!” Tony said angrily.
“Good Lord,” Ducky said again. “Well, it’s about time.”
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Post by nikkinor on Jan 7, 2006 17:05:41 GMT -5
“Good Lord,” Ducky said again. “Well, it’s about time.” I LOVE that line, sounds just like Ducky. |
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Post by stingrayfan on Jan 7, 2006 18:02:05 GMT -5
LOL nikki, I was thinking the same thing!
Aww poor Kate, you gotta love the protective, comforting Gibbs!! Poor Tony, he jealous?
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Post by LJG_NCIS on Jan 28, 2006 18:09:52 GMT -5
Okay, sorry this took sooooo long but things have been really hectic lately. So...here's the next chap in The Big Bomb. And the disclaimer is same as always; sadly, I haven't suddenly been bestowed NCIS in all of it's glory.  Chapter 8– New Developments “Come again?” McGee asked, finally speaking. “All that I’m saying is that it’s about time that something like this has happened. I can tell that you two have been feeling this way for quite some time now. The looks, the smiles. It’s quite romantic if you ask me. Reminds me of the time when a next-door neighbor of my youth. Rebecca Thurgood, God rest her soul, was locked in her broom closet and I..” “Duck, what do you mean ‘looks and smiles’?” Gibbs asked, interrupting Ducky’s latest story. “It is really quite self-explanatory Jethro. The way you look at each other is practically straight out of a cliche romance novel. And you smile at each other in a way that looks like two hormone-controlled teenagers.” By this time, Kate’s face had turned the shade of a strawberry ripe for the picking, and even Gibbs looked as if... what?! is this possible?! Gibbs blushing! This is unheard of! But, alas, it is the truth. Gibbs’ face was indeed tinted red, and it wasn’t from yelling at some dirt bag either. “Hold on a minute,” Tony said. “Am I missing something? I’ve never seen any of that. You must be way out of line here Ducky...” “No, I can assure you that I am correct.” Ducky said to Tony. Then turning to Jimmy he said, “Mr, Palmer will you please bring Abigail down here. We really must hear her side of the story.” “Yes Doctor,”Jimmy said with a grin, and then headed toward the elevator, realized that he definitely did not want to ride in that elevator, tripped on his own feet, miraculously somehow managed to stay on his feet, and was able to turn himself in the direction of the stairs. When he finally made It to the stairs, he got his bearings and took the stairs two at a time in his anticipation to see Abby. “Okay,” Tony said, making everyone’s focus return to the previous events. “Am I totally missing something here? I mean, how could they be making googoo eyes at each other, and I didn’t even notice it?!” “That’s an easy one Tony,” said McGee. “That’s because you were, uh, you know....” “No, we don’t know so just spit it out Probie!” “You didn’t notice it because you were too busy making googoo eyes at Kate!” McGee yelled, the immediately regretted saying anything. ‘Oh God Tony is going to make my life a living Hell!’ McGee thought to himself in dismay. And with that latest remark, jaws dropped for what seemed like the thousandth time in fifteen minutes. |
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Post by k8tyds on Jan 30, 2006 1:53:18 GMT -5
that was good LJG, could we please have some more soon???
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Post by dani on Jan 30, 2006 4:34:35 GMT -5
i LOVE it, LJG! ;D
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Post by LJG_NCIS on Apr 14, 2006 7:31:52 GMT -5
Guys, I am soooo sorry that I haven't updated my fics in such a long time. I've been really busy at school, and getting ready to head to DC in a few days. But I have the next few chaptters written, I just have to type them up. So you can expect some more pretty soon! ;D
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Post by LJG_NCIS on Apr 14, 2006 7:50:52 GMT -5
Here's the next installment of The Big Bomb, hope you guys enjoy it! Sorry again Chapter 9- The Moment of Truth... Drumroll, Please Everyone was standing around, processing what had just been said. Tony was staring daggers at McGee, who was looking like he wanted to shrink into his shoes and disappear. Kate was staring inquisitively at Tony, while Gibbs was looking questioningly at Ducky, who was taking in the while scene, looking not surprised in the least. It was if he had foreseen all of this. As if on cue, down the stairs came Jimmy, dragging Abby, who looked like a little girl in pigtails who was being taken to the principal by the teacher after she had pushed another kid at recess. “Something’s hinky here Jimmy,” Abby whispered. “Yeah, well, you’ve started a revolution,” Jimmy whispered back to her. “What do you mea-“ Abby started to say as they reached the bottom stair, but she was cut off by Gibbs. “Get down here and explain yourself, or no more Caf-Pows!” Gibbs barked, looking as much like a Marine as he ever had in Desert Storm. Abby stood up straight, fixed Gibbs with a withering stare (not quite as intimidating as his, of course), and bravely walked toward the “Boss man” and said, “Gibbs, no matter what you may say or do, and no matter how rough around the edges you are, and no matter how much you like to yell or smack people around on the back of their head, and no matter that you only give your people twenty minutes to do something that would normally take two hours, and no matter...” she was stopped short by a look from Gibbs that clearly said, “Get on with it...or else.” “–And no matter,” Abby continued, “how good you are at staring...I know that you would never take away my Caf-Pows, because inside of that gruff Marine there is a sweet, loving, caring, romantic teddy bear. And that is why I decided to hook you up with Kate, who needs a man like you in her life. No offense,” Abby said, turning to Kate, but that Mike guy you went out with a few months ago was totally disgusting. No to mention he needs to find a decent barber...” Abby trailed off. She knew that this wasn’t the time to be criticizing Kate’s choice of men in the past. ‘Why focus on the past,’ she thought, ‘when the present is so exciting and the future is bound to be full of surprises?’ **************** At Abby’s last comment, Gibbs self-consciously touched his white-walled hair. He tried not to focus on the turmoil that was churning in his minda and his heart. Instead, he tried to focus all of his attention on the current star of the show, Abby, because what she was saying might have an impact to either change his future for the better– he would find out that the incident in the elevator wasn’t just completely spontaneous and a one-time thing on Kate’s part, that she actually mirrored the feeling that he had held in his heart for her for so long; or for the worse–rejection. He looked to Kate to see her reaction. It was the moment of truth. |
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Post by LJG_NCIS on Apr 28, 2006 14:32:56 GMT -5
I guess if nobody's reading these anymore then I won't put up the next chapter... |
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Post by dani on Apr 28, 2006 14:52:10 GMT -5
Oh,please,I always read your stories!!! And I LOVE "The Big Bomb"!So please,please , please,please,please,please,please,please,please,please,please UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ;D
/I can add another "please" post if you not update! ;D/
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Post by Aerie on Apr 28, 2006 15:46:39 GMT -5
I guess if nobody's reading these anymore then I won't put up the next chapter...  You have 723 views of your story. Doesn't that count for something?  You know how it goes. Many times you want to try to think of something intelligent or witty to post, and can't think of it.  I know when I read the 400 Dark Angel fics, that I've downloaded and not had the time to read, I'm going to read NCIS fics. If we'll all still among the living then I shall give rave reviews. ;D |
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Post by LJG_NCIS on May 1, 2006 16:07:05 GMT -5
Thanks guys (and dani...another "please" won't be needed ;D) Just got to type up the next chapter and then I'll update, should hopefully get it posted in a few days or so Thanks again! Edited to say that I'll try to update The Holiday Season soon too, but TBB is a lot more fun to write and it's not really "the holiday season" anymore  |
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You have 723 views of your story. Doesn't that count for something? 
You know how it goes. Many times you want to try to think of something intelligent or witty to post, and can't think of it. 
